Arliah's Persuasive Writing

                    No Uniforms

Have you ever wanted to pick your own clothes out for school instead of boring old school uniforms.In my opinion I think that children should have the choice of picking their own clothes out for school.

My first reason is because some people don’t enjoy wearing the same clothes every single day.

Another reason is because school uniforms doesn’t allow  people to have individuality.

My last reason is because wearing uniforms takes away your freedom of expression.

My facts

My first fact is that they cost more than normal clothes.

My second fact is Tony Volk (from brock university)said that school uniforms don’t stop bullying they actually increase violent attacks.

Persuasive Writing Success Criteria

Introduction

• Opening question
• Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons

• Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts

Conclusion

• This ties back/recaps back to the introduction

Highlight evidence of linking words.

Feed back:

I really like how you did everything as you where and how your reasons where spot on.

Hannah

Thank you for your feedback Hannah and I know now that I need to work on my linking words.